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It's a mermaid:iconberwaldplz:

I hope you guys like this page! Finally, our first view of the heroine!xDD

The first panel took a lot of time!^^; But overall I'm proud of the whole thing=)The doujinshi's slowly moving along...Comments are highly appreciated!:D

2nd pg--->>[link]
4th pg--->>[link]



Story byİcookiemotel94
Artİcookiemotel94
Fullmetal AlchemistİHiromu Arakawa
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:iconkannaasa:
KannaAsa Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Crazy Tourists XDDD you got it, Jen ^0^
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:iconkhandfmafan:
khandfmafan Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012
....i have a few questions. 1. what caused an explosion or something on pg 2. 2. on pg 4 why does ed choke jen. and 3. when will you make pg 9!!!!
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:icondawolfster:
DaWolfster Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
cos he thinks she is the enemy
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:iconuomie:
uomie Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012  Hobbyist
jenny be careful...
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:iconcrystalgoldwyn:
CrystalGoldwyn Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011  Student Writer
XD I think I like Jen. =)
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:iconrukia-the-lynx:
Rukia-the-Lynx Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
HAHAHAHAHA :rofl: LOOL :iconloolfaceplz: Poor Ed xD
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:iconkasuki101:
Kasuki101 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL drunk tourists
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:iconwonderlandgiirl:
wonderlandgiirl Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
That's awesome! Your artwork is amazing, I'm folowing the story :D
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:iconyuzukithewhitewolf:
YuzukiTheWhiteWolf Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
XD
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:iconkiyoshi-seishin:
kiyoshi-seishin Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2011   Traditional Artist
love it ^. ^ this is a great doujinshi hope you keep going i saw the other pages :p all of them were great :hug:
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VampireKittyOfDoom Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
i approve of this doujinshi! Mind if I add it to my group :iconfma-fans-forever:?
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:iconcookiemotel94:
cookiemotel94 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2011
Yeah sure!^^
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:iconvampirekittyofdoom:
VampireKittyOfDoom Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome! Thank you, much appreciated! Lol, I'll probably just add a lot of your art to the group, cause it really is amazing!
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:iconlilypop87:
lilypop87 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Jen funny x3
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:iconanimeemm:
AnimeEmm Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2011  Professional Artist
next please!!!!!
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:iconanimeemm:
AnimeEmm Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2011  Professional Artist
OMG! awesome
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RosesRed4Ever Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2011
ACK! Ed's DROWNING! DON'T JUST STAND THERE GIRLS - DO SOMETHING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *ahem*...^_^ lovely comic!
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:iconcookiemotel94:
cookiemotel94 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2011
Thank you!!:iconlaplz:
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:iconerodrigo:
erodrigo Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2011
more please!!! i love it
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:iconcookiemotel94:
cookiemotel94 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2011
Thank you!!;^;
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:iconade-andario:
Ade-AndaRio Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2011
Jen looks so cute with her ponytail hair style :aww:
Also I like the design of the other girl, Jackie :nod:

"Crazy tourists"
LOL :rofl:
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:iconcookiemotel94:
cookiemotel94 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2011
Thank you!:hug:lol:XD:
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:iconfreakyfeline:
FreakyFeline Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LOLLL XDDD
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:iconwolfenalchemist:
WolfenAlchemist Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2011
>///< i love it!!
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:iconcookiemotel94:
cookiemotel94 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2011
thank you!8)
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:iconwolfenalchemist:
WolfenAlchemist Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2011
no prob. notin but truth! only this time, it doesn't steal your body parts.
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:iconrey-pey:
Rey-Pey Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2011
UGH!!!!!! WHY MUST WE WAIT!!!!!!!! SAVE THE "MERMAID"!!!!!! :icononionxdplz:
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:iconcookiemotel94:
cookiemotel94 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2011
xDD lol he's gonna be drowning for days~
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:iconcypii:
cypii Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
I laughed. :'D Also to your mermaid comment
I like it that you color the pages, though it must require much time and nerves. Also the drawing style is really FMA, and that combination makes me almost see it animated! XD (Sorry, bad explanation?)
Very confusing and interesting beginning for the story, we'll be waiting for more~!! :iconlachoirplz:
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:iconcookiemotel94:
cookiemotel94 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2011
Oh thank you!:hug::D Yes, I want to keep the readers on their toes>|D
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:iconsqueaky-boots:
squeaky-boots Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2011
Ahh I didn't mean to press send yet.
I also wanted to say I'm excited to see the next page. :heart:
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:iconcookiemotel94:
cookiemotel94 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2011
Haha it's okay!xD And thank you!I hope you will enjoy the next few pages!8)
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squeaky-boots Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2011
You're welcome.
And I'm sure I will, you're awesome. ( ^∀^)
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squeaky-boots Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2011
Incredibly well drawn, as usual. ( ^∀^)
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:icond-thessy:
D-Thessy Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2011
So cool! he looks an anime screencaps in a comic!! :dance:
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:iconcookiemotel94:
cookiemotel94 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2011
Muchas gracias!!:love::iconarmstrongtighthugplz:
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:icond-thessy:
D-Thessy Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2011
You're welcome. I like your comic and the suspense :giggle:
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:iconpumukly:
Pumukly Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
soo .. one thing.. I love thin doujinshi 'cuz it'c soo pretty colored ..and you rarely find colored doujinshi :love: great job Jen ! :D
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cookiemotel94 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2011
Oh thank you!*w*I'm glad you like it!:love:
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:iconpumukly:
Pumukly Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yeah I love your arts :love: keep it really strong up!
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:iconlatiaskirby:
latiaskirby Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol Ed. How do you make stuff like this?
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:iconcookiemotel94:
cookiemotel94 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2011
Sorry, I don't understand your question^^;
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:iconxmisaxamane:
xMisaxAmane Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2011  Student General Artist
Wait....you were right? D8; Ed was the one who fell off the cliff?
You ruined it for me the last comments and I didn't even realize it. Shame on you, Cookie </3
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:iconcookiemotel94:
cookiemotel94 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2011
No more spoilers for you:XD:~
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:iconxmisaxamane:
xMisaxAmane Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2011  Student General Artist
Good xDD
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:iconxmisaxamane:
xMisaxAmane Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2011  Student General Artist
in the last comments*

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:iconpikaiscool:
PikaIsCool Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2011  Student Digital Artist
oooh! OwO its edo-mermaid! XD

i like this page allot! Great colours! <3
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:iconcookiemotel94:
cookiemotel94 Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2011
Than you very much!:heart::hug:
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:iconpikaiscool:
PikaIsCool Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Your so very wellcome ^w^~<3 can't wait for the other pages!
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NilesDaughter-Comix Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
XD it's a very pretty "mermaid"...but you better save his lit...um, his behind...

i like how, after the 2nd page, you turned it around and made it humorous XD i love Jen on this page XD

i love your drawing and coloring style. i can't wait for the next page ^^
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