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JEN'S FIRST CRUSH GROWING UP. Danny's 4 years older than her, and has a brother a year younger than her. In the summer of his 12th year, he met the Vaughn sisters and was introduced to their father; who had recently undergone auto-mail surgery after returning from the Ishbal War, and became wheelchair-bound for the year as he recovered. Having been fascinated by the prostheses from having previous encounters with auto-mail users on Abelena, Danny's desire to become an engineer only grew stronger. There weren't any auto-mail mechanics on the island, so he was hoping to find a teacher in the city.

The Vaughn family recommended him the woman who had done David's surgery; Joanie Jacobs. After convincing his parents, they came to an agreement and Danny left the island with his mother to live in Charlotte City a few months later. Jen didn't have the chance guts to confess to him before he left.:iconlazycryplz:

Now, 19 yr's-old, Danny's the apprentice to Joanie Jacobs, a popular auto-mail mechanic and married mother of two. He's a very honest boy, who has the habit of getting too ahead of himself, and leading him to make some careless mistakes. He's always upfront, but can also be impatient, especially with his teacher. He can always be seen with a band-aid somewhere on his face, and bandages wrapped around his hands from several injuries. He was completely oblivious to Jen's affections when they were kids. He'd treated her more like a boy like the rest of the children had, and considered her as a good pal. He still values their friendship, but begins to see her more as a girl as they grew older. Jen appears to still hold some old feelings for the blonde, but shrugs it off as a kid's crush.

I feel like drawing fluff now/>3</ Oh, Danny, you little gearhead, why u so cute?
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Sonja-from-Finland's avatar
I love that Ed wasn't Jens first crush. I mean they met when they were pretty young and Jen had her super tomboy phase so she probably didn't want to have a crush on a guy or even dream about her future wedding at that age since she seemed pretty much be wishing she was a boy.

I like that Danny is older and didn't even realise Jen had a crush on him since most people don't realise other peoples crushes on them especially if they see the other person as a little kid and one of the guys. He seems like he's very sweet and friendly so Jen developing a crush on him makes sense and he is pretty good looking and as an older boy would seem much more mature and appealing since most boys of Jens own age probably were pretty childish at the age Jen would really start to get interested in boys.

Jen liking blonde boys in kind of cute trait and makes me wish that lot more people would give similarieties between their ocs first crushes/previous boyfriends and their eventual husbands. And that a lot more people would think about how not even close to every body marries their first love. EdWin gets a pass since it's obvious that appart from some childhood make believe games, they started to notice that the other is atractive and has great personality and would be a person they would like to spend the rest of their lives with, during the course of Manga/Brotherhood.

So since you ship EdWin in the manga is it a world where Jen dared to confess her feelings to Danny and they ended up together? I'm always assuming that all ocs exist in the world the story is set in, the canon characters just never met them in canon because they took left turn instead of a right turn etc.

I actually think that Danny would be very sweet as a boyfriend, so do you have a oc girlfriend for him already, or are you planning on making one eventually? I just like to think that every body ends up happily ever after. Maybe once Jen and Ed return from Germany they come across Danny and his wife(or girlfriend)? That would be kind of cute as well.

Sorry about making so many suggestions to you in my comments I just think all of the characters you make are intersting and want to find out more about them and what their lives are like in the future and so on.